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Reign Chapter 1.4 by TeamHeartGold Reign Chapter 1.4 by TeamHeartGold
In case you're wondering, this is what a comic looks like when you take week long breaks between panels and totally botch consistency. On a side note, I completely remember why I preferred making shorter updates now and will commence to do so post haste.

Now here's the lovely explanation on why I changed things:
Touko's original encounter with N was too damn cryptic and dramatic. Plain and simple. I made the rookie mistake of dishing out dramatic lines instead of real dialogue, which made the entire scene seem scripted. Here, Touko and N are free to lightly argue and build up tension naturally while also displaying Touko's very strong feelings.

This version also does a better job of hinting why Touko became randomly pissed at N to the point of being physical. I did nothing to show this at all in the original episode, but in this one you can string together what's going on in her mind with a little background information. That you get at the end of the chapter! So sorry for those of you who haven't read the original version, you'll have to wait to vaguely understand. :D

I also changed the Purrloin scene just a little. N's the one who names her Kaea. There's no real reason, it's just easier on the comic and creator to od so.

Nuzlocke Rules:
1) If a Pokemon faints, it's dead. Release or permanently box it.
2) Every Pokemon must be named.
3) Only the first Pokemon on each Route may be caught.
3a) No duplicates, including evolutionary forms
3b) Event based Pokemon, such as in-game gifts or legendaries, are exempt from this rule.
4) Only Moo-Moo milks can be bought. Everything else (including Pokeballs) must be found.

Reign
First: fav.me/d6v7rqf
Previous: fav.me/d6xeqod
Next: fav.me/d7835a8

On the Nuzlocke Forums: s7.zetaboards.com/Nuzlocke_For…
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:iconsupersexyghotmew95:
supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
YES FINALLY SOMEONE SEES N IS CREEPY
hugs
s sorry
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
HE IS SO CREEPY IN GAME. I mean, it's obvious he doesn't mean to be and is just super socially awkward... BUT SRSLY. HE'S A RESTRAINING ORDER WAITING TO HAPPEN.
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supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
RIGHT!
god you have no clue on how much i hate NXWHITE shipping
white bianca or white charen fan ftw
(i see white as bi is that bad)
S sorry
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Nah, your ships are your ships. The game never talks about sexualities, so you're free to ship whoever you want. :P
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supersexyghotmew95 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
okie XD
hugs of doom
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:icondarkblackarcanine:
DarkBlackArcanine Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gotta say this scene does flow better..and N gets slammed for being a stalker.
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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:icondarkblackarcanine:
DarkBlackArcanine Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kinda curious to see how this will play out differently....and how it will come back to bite her in the ass
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
1/4 through the next update already, so you'll see soon~

... okay, well that one's pretty much the same as the first time around in all honesty. But after that one--! Then you'll see! -evil laughter-
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DarkBlackArcanine Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*grins evilly* Someday i will show u why my nickname is The Hyena
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Hollowgirl136 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well that turned ugly fast. 
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
resists temptation to make yo mama joke

Yup. Touko assumed something based on something that had happened to her at some point in the past which will not be revealed until the end of the chapter. While it was logical for her to assume that things that she did, she was dead wrong and it's going to royally screw her over.

Oh, Touko. Don't worry, we still like you.

Thanks for the comment!
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dragontaxi Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the panel sequence where you drew her grabbing N's collar
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! I had a lot of trouble with that part, honestly. I'm not great at drawing action sequences or contact between characters (I make terrible action lines and hands), so I'm really glad you liked it.
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Canis--latrans Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft. Your trees look fine. Everything is great. You really oughta post more!
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
My trees are fat and their leaves have no purpoooosssssseeeeee.

But thanks. And trust me, I try. But then I get distracted by things. Like DOTA. Lots of DOTA.
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A-Zetka Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And then shit happend and went very intense....
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yup. The League and Team Plasma enjoy taking massive dumps on Touko's life. :iconpoopplz:
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FuryouMiko Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer
lol. Accusing N of being a sleazeball pervert. That's a new one. :D
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
... that's not what she was doing. XD

But it'd actually be funny to read a comic with a sleazeball pervert N. It'd be a total shocker, considering how socially awkward he is in-game. -ponders future crackish ideas-
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FuryouMiko Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Writer
Oh. *ducks head* completely misunderstood...
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Miscomunication Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooh. Tension rising all over the place.
I quite like this page c: (and tbh I'm glad you've started this re-vamp because I am starting to understand the story of your nuzlocke a lot more now XD)
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hehe. I'm glad it's easier to understand. That's part of the reason why I redid the Nuzlocke. Thanks!
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Horobinota Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can tell you're not totally pleased with this page, but man, it's still gorgeous. Very well done! ^^
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TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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ed665 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
well............. that went well -_-
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:iconteamheartgold:
TeamHeartGold Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Touko is the master of having civil conversations. :P
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kayanne21 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Intense 
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