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Cave of Origins: Prologue III

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I really, really love drawing Treecko. Can you tell?

As we go, more and more rules of this alternate universe will be explained. For now, we know:

1) At 20, a woman must chose a man to marry and become pregnant
2) At 55, both men and woman die, or are "retired"
3) Trainers must register their information and starter Pokemon
4) The League controls and oversees everything
5) If a trainer becomes champion, they must face Kyogre
6) Trainers only travel during the Dry Seasons at 18.



Rules:
1) Only the first water Pokemon of each route may be caught.
2) All shiny Pokemon (regardless of type) may be caught.
3) No items used in battle
a) Held items are ok
4) If a Pokemon faints, it's dead.
5) Nickname all Pokemon

Main Cast:

Protagonist: Mazu Wilde
Lovable Friend: Brenden Birch
Cryptic Badass: Steven Stone
Lucky Idiot: Wally Chance

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Kikwoka's avatar
This is so awesome! The artwork is great, and I like the take you have on the sapphire story line! You've also managed to expertly shroud your world in mystery, while still keeping it out of confusion.

Art-wise, the faces and people sometimes look a little stiff and static. I think the way you draw side view faces is great, but front view seems a little off. If you make the top lids of the eyes a little thicker and the eyelashes taper to a point, that might help.

Non the less, I think this is fantastic - the backgrounds are simply amazing! Despite my criticism, their poses - though stiff at times - are generally very good, you draw clothes really well - I usually have issues with the folds etc! The fact that you decided to have them talk by water, the type that you have to use in this run, was a really nice touch!

Sorry if I seemed preachy in this, I really do think that its an excellent start, and I can't wait for more!!!!!